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#1 Voted @ JPS - E.L.F. - White Leaves
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E.L.F. - White Leaves
FREE READ!
www.jukepopserials.com/home/read/82
MARCH brings the final four installments!
Finale time!

Don't miss out!
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Do you want critique of your story?
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Sure Arthur! 
We can always use crits.

good or bad.
Im aware the first chapter has some turn of phrase issues already.
but it clearly hasnt hurt peoples read-on appetites.
and theyll be fixed in the edit.
If youd like to read n review, that'd be swell.
It is free and only 3 chptrs now remain to be published
Chpt 26 just went live the other day.
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If a critique is done properly, there is no bad one. Of course, you, as the author, are free to take the suggestions someone gives, or reject them. I was in a writer's group--a sometimes rather brutal one--and the experience was invaluable, I learned a great deal from it.
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