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    #1 Voted @ JPS - E.L.F. - White Leaves

    #1 Voted for 2nd consecutive month!

    E.L.F. - White Leaves
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    Do you want critique of your story?

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    Sure Arthur!
    We can always use crits.

    good or bad.

    Im aware the first chapter has some turn of phrase issues already.
    but it clearly hasnt hurt peoples read-on appetites.
    and theyll be fixed in the edit.


    If youd like to read n review, that'd be swell.

    It is free and only 3 chptrs now remain to be published

    Chpt 26 just went live the other day.

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    If a critique is done properly, there is no bad one. Of course, you, as the author, are free to take the suggestions someone gives, or reject them. I was in a writer's group--a sometimes rather brutal one--and the experience was invaluable, I learned a great deal from it.

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